100 word challenge
one day I was walking along the street with Molly when we came across a banana. We thought this was just a normal banana but we were wrong. It was a black banana and we all know that black bananas are great for baking banana cakes so we took it home, gathered some ingredients and made a banana cake. But a problem occurred when peeling the banana we realized that it was rock solid,we jumped on it, smashed it with a heavy hammer and even after that it still wasn't damaged. So we had to make a regular cake.
Dia duit Chloe (Hello in Irish!)
ReplyDeleteWell done on writing a fine story. It flows nicely and reads well. How clever of you to know that old bananas are great for banana bread. I wonder why the banana was so hard? Very strange. I am glad you were able to make a cake in the end.
Keep writing! Maith thú, Mairéad
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ReplyDeleteHi Chloe, this is so cool and interesting. Remember about the capitalization rules.
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